If You Have 5 Minutes Could You Please Help?

[debris4spike]

I have been doing one of those "design yourselves" web pages linked with my job.  I started it last year and have just done a bit more to it this evening as I am taking part in a health fair next month so it will be a good oportunity to get my business cards changed and some fliers etc produced.

But what I really need is

a)   Are there any more "questions that need answering"

b)   A bit (but not toooooooooooo much, please) of constructive criticism ... but please remember I am working within a Web package, so can't do 100% what I want.

Thanks for your help.

Oh, yes - The Web address I suppose would be helpful! 

www.budeosteopath.co.uk

Comments

[deborahw37.livejournal.com]

The FAQ is fine


do you need the biography or will people mostly be interested in your qualifications and experience as an Osteopath?

The major problem is the site only takes up about half of my screen , the right hand side is all black space... is this a settings thing or the layout ?

[debris4spike]

Thanks Deb - glad you took the time. Hadn't thought about more detail of my working practice/experience so will look into that.

Also - the overall layout ... again I set it up last year (before discovereing LJ) - so now I know a bit more about the concept of layout I shall go into the set-up and see what I can do.

Thanks for taking the time to look and for your helpful comments

[underthis-shade.livejournal.com]

I don't know how valid my opinion would be...but I think it looks really good. It's not cluttered, which, in my opinion, is the most important thing when it comes to web pages.

[debris4spike]

Thanks for having a look - no, that is what I wanted people to just see what they thought.

Yes I have seen a few sites where there is so much happening - and things "flashing" at you, which I find off-putting as well.

Thank you